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posted by [personal profile] nickygabriel at 07:07pm on 25/01/2011
Kendra! LOL I had to laugh there. I don’t know why all people call the girls in S&H stories Kendra. But it’s cute :)

Sky reached down and patted Hutch’s thigh, too.
This line is wonderful! Starsky's son through and through! I love it :)

And I love dialogues! You are really good at that, woman! And you can write action very well. I always see what they are doing :) If you ever tell me you can’t write, I will send you to read this story.

I really like your Hutch. I hope there is a sequel waiting, because it’s not a happy story and it’s not finished for me. I missed Meredith there :)

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